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I. Script Doctor (Rewriting)
Script Doctoring is when I'm actually making creative changes to
your screenplay as a co-writer, as opposed to giving you notes that
you
would then need to execute yourself. I have enjoyed rewriting
several screenplays and treatments for clients over the years, and I am
always open to new jobs should my schedule allow. I can
also perform rewrites on other material, such as game scripts,
pitches, comedy
sketches or project proposals.
I will quote you a rate once I get more information about your
project. Credit will be agreed upon by both parties and
specified in the contract. I am open to "blind" rewrites
where I do not receive credit.
Please Contact Me to discuss
your needs.
II. 8-Week Guided Home Course $749
Personalized guidance via email and phone/video conference as you develop your new screenplay. A structured, proven 8 week schedule takes you from initial concept to a detailed outline and your first 30 pages in proper script format.
- 55-page 8-Week Story Maps Home Course e-book, which includes all weekly lectures and assignments.
- 10 sample Story Maps from successful produced movies.
- Priority email response.
- Bi-weekly phone or Skype video conferences.
- Notes on your weekly pages.
Simply the best personal guidance available to develop and write your screenplay on the right track for success.
III. Full Consultation $449Back by Popular Demand! Discount to return clients!
This comprehensive option features detailed handwritten notes, a
typed worksheet with notes and a scoring grid, email follow-ups AND a
follow-up phone call. This is a fantastic service at a
competitive rate.
What you get:
- I will read your draft 3 times.
- detailed handnotes on the draft, showing my
reactions and questions as I read it nd pointing out
problems with all major elements,
especially in regards to structure, pacing, cutting & trimming,
clarity, emotion, and your voice on the page.
- Crucial line editing(not a complete copy-edit
but
fixes to major mistakes and red-lining what I suggest you cut and trim).
- 4-5 pgs. of handwritten summary at the end of the script. A “wrap-up” that outlines the major critical issues in your script and touches on my overall commercial assessment. Please include five blank pages at the end of your script for these notes.
- 15 Crucial Story Questions worksheet — how your
script addresses these vital issues. This most closely resembles a coverage report, with a "box score"
rating on a scale of Excellent, Good, Fair, Poor and includes detailed
typed
notes.
- My "Story Maps" E-book. Includes an exclusive
Primer on my unique narrative structure process and several sample
Story Maps from successful movies.
- 2 rounds of email follow-up questions.
- 1 hour FOLLOW-UP PHONE CALL.
Requirements: Completed feature-length screenplay (90-130 pages), in standard screenplay format in COURIER FONT, 12 POINT SIZE, with 1" margins on top and bottom and page numbers.
Note: please judge the length of your script with 1" margins on top and bottom of the document and the dialogue set in a 3.5"-4" wide block. Other margins may distort the true length of the draft. Rates increase slightly if over 130 pages.
Please Contact Me for more information or to book your consultation.
Looking for Screenplay "Coverage?" Please see ‘Why I
Don’t Write Screenplay
“Coverage”and Why You Probably Don’t Need It’
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IV. Fastback Page Notes $249
Includes 2-Week Rush delivery for no extra fee!
Note: no extra discounts on this service.
What you get:
- 6-10 pages of typed notes emailed to you,
first addressing the big picture in paragraph form (concept, genre, act structure, protagonist goals and sympathy, character development, commercial considerations) and then moving into a list of detailed page notes. I will cover positives and
negatives with the major dramatic elements, as well as form,
format and word choice (your writing style and 'voice' on the page).
- Is it working? Am I sucked in? Where is it not clear? Who's the audience?
- Commercial EvaluationHow I see your script fitting into the marketplace and how you can best focus your story on a commercially proven genre and audience.
- My "Story Maps" E-book. Includes an exclusive
Primer on my unique narrative structure process and several sample
Story Maps from successful movies.
- 2 email follow-up questions.
Note: I prefer to read on paper, so I will ask you to mail your draft (unless you're outside of the U.S.).
Please Contact Me for more information or to book your consultation.
V. The "Intro" $89(Discount available
with code)
This is a great way to get a sample of me and my method so you can
decide if I'm the best script coach for you or not.
What you get:
- My "Story Maps" E-book. Includes an exclusive Primer on my unique narrative structure process and several sample Story Maps from successful movies.
- A current "hot" Hollywood screenplay with the accompanying Story Map. This is not a script that is readily available on the internet; it is a new script that's going into production with major stars attached. I created this Story Map myself so you can see how a Map relates directly to a script on the page, as well as a movie on the screen.
- 30-Minute Phone Call or Skype call to discuss
your story
and screenwriting goals.
Requirements: An idea for a screenplay.
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VI. MASTER DEVELOPMENT PROGRAM Please inquire about availability
This is the prestige option for those screenwriters looking for professional guidance FROM CONCEPT SELECTION ALL THE WAY THROUGH TO SUBMISSION.
Three to six months of one-on-one coaching from me on the entire process, open to anyone regardless of experience, but only for screenwriters serious about working hard enough to develop, write and market a winning spec screenplay.
Too often, I see writers with the raw talent and skills on the page who are trying to make the best of a poor concept that just won't interest the major producers and reps in the industry. I wish I were there from the outset to give them crucial feedback on how to begin the entire process and then be available to help them stay on track through each step of the way.
As my Master Pupil, you will have the highest priority response to your emails and phone calls. I'm here to work for you to achieve your goals.
Steps to Success...
- Finding your Concept and writing a
bulletproof Logline
- Developing the Concept into a Story Map
outline
- Writing the Script on a structured schedule
of deadlines
- Rewriting and Polishing
- Building a Submission Strategy and Target List
- Writing your Marketing Materials (logline,
phone pitch,
one-pager)
- Submission and Follow-up
You will have access to all of my resources, including contact lists
of top companies, pro scripts making the rounds in Hollywood, and
feedback from other industry pros that I know.
BONUS #1: I guarantee
you
feedback on your logline and one-pager from two industry professionals
(a produced screenwriter and one of the following: Agent, Manager, or
Development Executive).
BONUS #2: I guarantee
you
two submissions of your completed screenplay; one to a Rep (Agent,
Manager) and one to a Producer/Studio. These are submissions to
companies that would otherwise be closed to you without a Rep or
personal referral.
Please Contact Me for more
information or to
book your Master Program. I look forward to working with you.
Turnaround Time{back to top}
Normal Turnaround Time For Services
3-4 weeks to complete the analysis, depending on my schedule and your needs. I will always confirm a deadline date when I book your consultation. Faster turnaround is available if my schedule allows...
Rush Job (2 weeks or less): $75 extra
"Super Rush" Job (1 week or less): $125 extra
Payment{back to top}
Your payment books your consultation. My policy is "First
Come, First Serve," so I suggest acting fast to get the best
turnaround. Payment must be sent upfront
with your work. Please inquire about the best form of payment for your consultation.
Extras{back to top}
Electronic Notes (MS Word, Celtx or Final Draft "scriptnotes" or scanning
of handwritten noted pages): $100 NOW ONLY $50!
Electronic Delivery: $20 printing fee (waived with Electronic Notes).
DISCOUNTS
I can offer generous discounts on many services to
members of
quality film and screenwriting groups, including the WGA, Inktip,
WGC, TWB, NYU
Tisch West, Tribe Hollywood, UCLA Screenwriting Extension, IFC,
RWA, WIF,
SAG, Bafta and others.
Please inquire
about the current offers.
How to Contact Me for a Consultation{back to top}
By eMail
dan@actfourscreenplays.com
By Phone
310-849-1402
(please leave a message including your CITY, PHONE NUMBER and EMAIL ADDRESS if I’m not in. I will not share your email with any other source.)
By Mail
I am located in West Hollywood in Los Angeles, California, USA. I do not give out my mailing address on this site, to prevent junk mail and unconfirmed submissions.
I prefer to communicate with you first before you send me your work.
My Policies{back to top}
Confidentiality
Your work is totally confidential with me. I do not accept written work unless it is first registered with the WGA or copyrighted. I do not need your WGA registration number (nor does anyone but yourself).
My personal policy
If your script is ready to submit and does not need my help, I will return it to you free of charge and with one referral to a contact in the industry.